Tuesday, 26 October 2010

Surrender





Tears of gold shedding

Falling without sound nor cry

Selfless surrender

7 comments:

  1. Like many selfless surrenders, this one is a precursor to something being reborn. Gorgeous haiku, Margaret.

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  2. Margaret - sometimes we have to give over our mournings. It is the only way we can go on. Wonderful thought and poem.

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  3. Karen - That's what I love about nature. It all comes around again and again. Thanks Karen. :)

    Kaye - Nature and life goes hand in hand. The same as we shed tears, the trees shed their leaves. But only for a few months until spring brings everything back to life. Same with us - we only have to give it time. Thanks Kaye.

    Onkar - Thank you for always taking the time to come over here, read and leave a comment. I really appreciate it! :)

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  4. @ Tamarind

    Thank you very much!

    Looking forward to reading your blog. :)

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  5. im speechless. that was so beautiful and only 3 lines. this truly shows that it is possible to change somebody's life with poetry. this was very touching, thank you so much for writing it.

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