Your heartbeat next to mine
Entwined into one
Your fingers knotted through mine
Never to be undone
The smile on your lips
Radiates your whole face
Like a beautiful sunrise
Soars my heart into space
Time stands still
A moment to share
No words need to be spoken
Into your eyes I stare
In those eyes I read
What my heart longs to hear
They're saying the words
I love you, my dear
I love you too
My eyes never lie
I'll always love you
Until the day I die
Margaret this was sooo filled with love.
ReplyDeleteIt was love-ly, brilliant :)
Esp that last verse was my favorite! :)
Keep penning, its nice to read you!
PS: Missed the last post.. some very nice pics.. u look pretty in salwar :)
Margaret, so loving!
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful ...
Loved this poem!
Margie:)
Very beautiful Margaret, the writer in you is very much in love...:)
ReplyDeletewish I could write one like this someday...:)
Blessed are you and the one you love...yes being capable of loving someone so much is a true blessing !beautiful!!
ReplyDeleteA beautiful love song
ReplyDeleteHow lovely, these sentiments. You have rendered them well.
ReplyDeleteI liked it.nice.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, Margaret! Take a look at my place and see how this can apply to other loves, as well.
ReplyDeleteAnyime you want a job, am sure Hallmark would be all too pleased to hire you. I think I'll pay you to write my wedding woes. :)
ReplyDeleteSimple in its heart and power.
ReplyDelete@ Leo
ReplyDeleteI thought this would be to your liking Leo. :)
Glad you got to see my last post too. Thanks...
@ Margie
Thank you so much. Sorry I haven't been over to your blog lately, I'll make sure I'll get there today!
@ Amity
I'm sure you can!! Thanks.. :)
@ Kavita
You're right Kavita, loving is a true blessing that we shouldn't take for granted.
Thanks for reminding me of that.
@ Tomz
Hi, and welcome here. Thanks for stopping by & commenting.
@ K.
Thank you dear friend. I hope to write poety as good as you one day... But I have a long way to go!
@ Gyanban
I'm glad you liked it. Welcome here, hope to see you again. :D
@ Karen
Ohhh, I've been over to you and seen you're miraculous new love. Yes, this poem applys to every relationship. I know the love you feel for your new granddaughter, Juliet. God bless her.
@ Nishant
Thanks Nishant for your lovely comment. It's great to know others appreciate what I write.
No, I'm afraid this photo wasn't taken by me or my new camera. I can't take the credit for it. :)
@ Aniket
Thanks for the tip! I'll remember Hallmark if I ever leave my current job! :D
And...I'll take you up on that...I'll write your wedding woes - for free! (Any plans??) :D
@ Jason
I'm glad you felt the power even through it's simplicity.
Emoting love in the most expressive manner. Really good.
ReplyDelete@ Old Monk
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting, glad you liked it - stick around for more. :)
Very tender. Very beautiful.
ReplyDelete@ Onkar
ReplyDeleteThank you. :)
:-) Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThank you Cat! :)
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